hey jack, i just want to say at the the start how you have the purple writing i can't read it. Ok I like how you have added speech bubbles to you slide.I also like how you have them walking kinda slowly.i also like how you used a thinking bubble as smoke i think.i just want to ask what are the teath and the blue thing?
Wow hi jack this is a very good piece of work it is so detailed and the background is good and i like your chartores you have made keep up the good work how long did this take you but maybe you should lay out the sumarie a bit beter keep up the good work
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ReplyDeletehey jack, i just want to say at the the start how you have the purple writing i can't read it. Ok I like how you have added speech bubbles to you slide.I also like how you have them walking kinda slowly.i also like how you used a thinking bubble as smoke i think.i just want to ask what are the teath and the blue thing?
ReplyDeleteWow hi jack this is a very good piece of work it is so detailed and the background is good and i like your chartores you have made keep up the good work how long did this take you but maybe you should lay out the sumarie a bit beter keep up the good work
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